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Before:

Hello I'm Marc Nunyez and I am in your class. Mainly, my hobbies 

are play basketball and other sports and I really enjoy the 
cinema. I play basketball in a team with Didac and Marti.

I've done batxillerato because is necessary to have a god job in the 

future or study in university. My subjects I've chosen are Technology, 

chemistry and Maths. I chose this subjects because I will study 

Technology in university.

When I finish the batxillerato I don't know what I will do.

After:

Hello I'm Marc Nunyez and I am in your class. Mainly, my hobbies are
playing basketball and other sports and I really enjoy the

cinema. I play basketball in a team with Didac and Marti.

I've done batxillerato because it is necessary to have a god job in the 

future or study in university. The subjects I've chosen are Technology, 

chemistry and Maths. I chose this subjects because I will study 

Technology at university.

When I finish the batxillerato I don't know what I will do.